On writing women characters
Apr. 12th, 2012 08:37 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
neadodsThe authors I internet-stalk have been doing a fair amount of discussing how to write women as characters at the moment. And if there was one thing that I'd love to get into the conversation, it is this:
Stop using tits as a shorthand for femininity. More than that, stop using how women dress their upper bodies as a shorthand for how they feel about their sexuality. (I'm looking at you, Byatt. You should have known better.)
Here's a handy hint for the Y-enabled authors reading this blog:
Women don't think about their breasts very often.
Seriously, once you've grown them, figured out your overall dressing style and found a bra you like, the whole boob thing is pretty much a done deal. In general day-to-day life, the overall chestal concern isn't "how do I feel about my tits?" It's "is this bra going to behave?" And I don't mean "Will it lift, separate, and present my apparatus to advantage?" I mean "18 Hour Comfort my ass; this damned thing's riding up/falling down/digging in/falling off my shoulders a-fucking-gain!" (Spend a day in a dance belt, boys, and see how long it takes you to stop caring what's in it and start obsessing on comfort.)
And besides... was the gender of your characters changed, would you really be writing things like "Jack dressed to the left to show his confidence today"?
Even the girliest of girls is going to think about her hair and nails more than her mammaries. After all, the first two are in plain sight at all times, while her breasts aren't. Boobs don't require a lot of maintenance, after all. They don't need to be filed, trimmed, or polished, and are far less likely to kink in odd directions if you sleep on them wet.
Oh, things are different if the scene is specifically about sexuality. (Scott Wentworth once wrote with remarkable surprise that both his leading ladies adjusted their bodices while singing the line "weapons ready" in Enter the Guardsman. What was he expecting?) But on a day to day basis? When other people aren't making a big deal out of them?
We. Don't. Care.
I just had to get that off my chest.
Stop using tits as a shorthand for femininity. More than that, stop using how women dress their upper bodies as a shorthand for how they feel about their sexuality. (I'm looking at you, Byatt. You should have known better.)
Here's a handy hint for the Y-enabled authors reading this blog:
Women don't think about their breasts very often.
Seriously, once you've grown them, figured out your overall dressing style and found a bra you like, the whole boob thing is pretty much a done deal. In general day-to-day life, the overall chestal concern isn't "how do I feel about my tits?" It's "is this bra going to behave?" And I don't mean "Will it lift, separate, and present my apparatus to advantage?" I mean "18 Hour Comfort my ass; this damned thing's riding up/falling down/digging in/falling off my shoulders a-fucking-gain!" (Spend a day in a dance belt, boys, and see how long it takes you to stop caring what's in it and start obsessing on comfort.)
And besides... was the gender of your characters changed, would you really be writing things like "Jack dressed to the left to show his confidence today"?
Even the girliest of girls is going to think about her hair and nails more than her mammaries. After all, the first two are in plain sight at all times, while her breasts aren't. Boobs don't require a lot of maintenance, after all. They don't need to be filed, trimmed, or polished, and are far less likely to kink in odd directions if you sleep on them wet.
Oh, things are different if the scene is specifically about sexuality. (Scott Wentworth once wrote with remarkable surprise that both his leading ladies adjusted their bodices while singing the line "weapons ready" in Enter the Guardsman. What was he expecting?) But on a day to day basis? When other people aren't making a big deal out of them?
We. Don't. Care.
I just had to get that off my chest.
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Date: 2012-04-13 05:23 am (UTC)And not just my own, either (though I wish mine were smaller on a daily basis and I totally agree with the [)"is this bra going to behave?" And I don't mean "Will it lift, separate, and present my apparatus to advantage?" I mean "18 Hour Comfort my ass; this damned thing's riding up/falling down/digging in/falling off my shoulders a-fucking-gain!"] part, and of course you are right that tits, or how they are "dressed" should never be used as a handy shortcut to a woman's feelings about sexuality.
All that aside though, I'd be lying if I said I don't love boobs...or notice them. Even if it's not on a day to day basis. But then I'm not a straight woman...
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Date: 2012-04-13 05:35 am (UTC)P.S. I'm straight, but I totally appreciate a nice rack on a woman.
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Date: 2012-04-13 12:47 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-13 04:58 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-13 12:47 pm (UTC)*snicker*
But even then... when it comes to yours, your instant reaction is your physical comfort. Even if you like boobs, *your own* aren't the definition of your sexuality.
Hell, I'm the proverbial arrow and I notice them, but I hang out at the rennfaires, where the ta tas come out to say "huzzah," so to speak.